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you are my oxygen

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September 21, 2015
you are my oxygen by edns uses the brevity of haiku to create devastating imagery that captures heartache.
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Suggested by RogueMudblood
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Literature Text

i feel you slipping
through the cracks in my window
leaving me breathless
i stop breathing soon enough
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"...it's only words and words are all I have to take your heart away..."